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In enlish today the teacher asked us to write a blog post about what we think we will be doing in out future. This is what I think:

I’m not very sure about what I’m going to do in my future. On the moment I’m thinking of becoming a jockey just like my dad, but that can be very hard because you have to be talented. But when I grow up I definitely want to do something with sport, 1: because I enjoy it and 2: because Its my biggest talent. But If that doesn’t happen I want to be a business person, buy houses and rent them or buy cars and sell them for a little more.

football is tough.

 
The ball go’s around from pass to pass, confusing the opponent. That’s the way a team should play. Its way easier and more dashing, than when you do everything in your own. The ball is faster than you are. The ball go’s around from side to side, pass after pass. This is called teamwork. One of the best teams in the world is Manchester United. But that’s not because they have the best players, cause they don’t. The reason they are one of the best teams in the world, is because they use teamwork very well. They know where they have to be, they know where another is, and they know when to shoot and pass where. This is half  because of their coach Alex Ferguson, and half because of the players. 
 

competition
 
 
Its the semi-finale, the team has never been this motivated. You can see what their thinking: We have to win this match! 

In class the last few weeks we have been talking about voice and word choice for our magazine article, here are some things we did.

For voice we first had write a paragraph about what makes us, us. surprisingly it was pretty hard. but when I when  whas writing for 10 minutes, it started to get easyer.  we also had to hichlight some main words, some of my words were: football, music,dogs. the piece of writing was private so on they end i ripped it in pieces.

After voice, we did word choice. in word choice we talked about synonyms. these are words that have nearly the same meaning.

Another thing we looked at was verbs, nouns, adjectives and averbs. when we went home we had to put some grammar in our magazine.

I learned that how more describing and outstanding words you use, the better your piece of writing is.

In class We took our 3 main ideas, for example my 3 ideas were teamwork, physically tuf and competision. Then we wrote our 3 supporting facts we already knew. after that we made questions about what we didn’t know and asked other people in the school. Finally we highlighted our transitions.

In english I am making an magazine article about why I like football. I had to make 8 ideas why I like football: 1.) Its a teamsport. 2.) Its a tacktical sport. 3.) There is a lot of running. 4.) Its a tuf sport. 5.) I like sports with balls. 6.) I like matches. 7.) I like competitions. 8.) you make lots of friends. and finally I had to make a clear topic sentence wich is: The score is 2-2, im very tired. the team plays well together, and there are only 5 minutes left. we have to win this match!

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1. How did you feel about this kind of work before you started? How have your feelings changed?

In school today we did a phisical work. We washed clothes we made tortilla’s and we swepet the floor. Then the teachers asked  how we felt about this work before we started. I thought it was going to be fun because doing it with more people makes it a lot nicer.

What did you learn about yourself while doing this kind of work? Was it easy? Was it difficult?

I learnt that cleaning can be very hard and tiering and that it can take very long if your on your own. This time it whas fun doing it with everybody else but doing it every day and doing it in your own would be very hard. I think that washing the clothes was the hardest because Im not used to wash it like that cause if I wash clothes I just put it in the washing mashine.

How did you feel while doing this work? Did you enjoy it? Were you proud? Were you embarrassed? Why?

When I was doing this work I felt normal because I knew I didnt need to do it for my job and every day. I enyojed doing this work because I like it more then learning in class. I whas not imbaressed because I think that I was’nt the only one who whas not that good at cleaning.

i think going to school is a privilege because there are children in other countries who dont have money to go to school and need to work to survive. on all the places ive been , the children think going to school is normal and see it for granted. so I have never meet anyone who is excited about school and does’nt have any education.

If i had to pack up all my things and leave in an instant i would  take a picture of my dogs.  i found my dogs on the street. there both white, and ther are half saluki and they are 1 and a half years old. one is a little darker on his back then they onther, there a boy and girl and the boys name is Bibi and the girls name is Shine.and i would also take a picture of my family so ill never forget them.  a diary if i had one so ill remember the good times in my life and could keep writing. i would also take a drawingbook to make drawings in my free time. and i would take my ipod to listen music to cheer me up in bad times.

Esperanda can’t marry Miguel because miguel is in a lower rank and esperanda’s parents will possibly refuse to let Esperanda marry miguel. Esperanda has to marry someone her rank and her level education. I think this is not good because i think  you should marry the one you love and it doesn’t matter who that persons parents are or how much money that person has.